Thursday, 19 February 2015

DPS draft 3

This is the latest draft of my double page spread. I had received feedback from my lecturer and some things had to be changed. She said the article needed to be longer, the columns had to be wider, the fonts for the "exclusive interview" and "I'm joining IKE damage" had to be changed as they seemed unfitting to a rather formal layout for the page, Another caption to be added, the picture to be moved to the bottom and the text to be the same colour all the way through. I have been on Photoshop and fixed these problems.

The reason I made the text different colours was to help people distinguish who was speaking in the interview, now I have changed this with how bold the text is. The bold sentences are from the interviewer and the italic sentences are from the celebrity being interviewed. I have also added a bit more to the article, I included 2 more questions and made him sound more shocked and surprised. I have also included one small bit at the end of the article. The title fonts have been changed to the revolution font, i now think the DPS looks better.

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