Tuesday, 17 February 2015

DPS draft 2


This is draft 2 to my double page spread.
After draft one I got some feedback, a few things needed improving. this included the columns being too wide, the page numbers being too big, the sizes of the headlines etc.

Many things remain intact such as the red M in the background, the article remains unchanged, and the layout is mostly the same, its only a few small things that are different.

Firstly the placement of the image of "Mortdog" is now in the middle and is much bigger, this is to make the image look less like an afterthought like it wad in draft one where it's just at the end of the article. The text is a darker blue to make it blend better with the white and red background and to make it easier to see. The  big page numbers at the top have been exchanged for being small on the bottom, I did this to make it look more like an actual music magazine. The star with "exclusive interview" has been removed and changed to a red banner at the top because I think it makes the page design look more professional. Finally the columns are more compact and the opening paragraph has been included, this was to add more to the column.

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